I really like the first one :y:
I have never seen anything like what you did on the left with the reapeated sig, i like it =D.
I really like the edgy style in the smudging.
The flow is good.
You could maybe work on the lighting a bit cause its kinda hard to tell where the source is.
I like the text, although you could try a stroke with a blue tint to kinda match the theme.
Other than that its an awesome sig :y:, keep it up bro