Post: Please CnC
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12-12-2010, 04:19 AM
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to start off the background rlly doesnt match the render but thts not a big deal
the text on the bottom left is rlly small i didnt even notice it at first when i first looked
the text on the side distracts the focus of the render and makes it the focus instead of the render
the sig in general is way to monotone it needs more color to it
the sig itself is too simple it just looks like duplicate layers of him behind him in different blending options
try adding c4ds and blurring the background to add some depth to it bc it looks flat
it needs alot of work so i give it a 2/5
just keep usin those tuts and ull improve so keep it up
the text on the bottom left is rlly small i didnt even notice it at first when i first looked
the text on the side distracts the focus of the render and makes it the focus instead of the render
the sig in general is way to monotone it needs more color to it
the sig itself is too simple it just looks like duplicate layers of him behind him in different blending options
try adding c4ds and blurring the background to add some depth to it bc it looks flat
it needs alot of work so i give it a 2/5
just keep usin those tuts and ull improve so keep it up
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12-12-2010, 04:25 AM
#3
Just4Hax
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Originally posted by SFX
to start off the background rlly doesnt match the render but thts not a big deal
the text on the bottom left is rlly small i didnt even notice it at first when i first looked
the text on the side distracts the focus of the render and makes it the focus instead of the render
the sig in general is way to monotone it needs more color to it
the sig itself is too simple it just looks like duplicate layers of him behind him in different blending options
try adding c4ds and blurring the background to add some depth to it bc it looks flat
it needs alot of work so i give it a 2/5
just keep usin those tuts and ull improve so keep it up
the text on the bottom left is rlly small i didnt even notice it at first when i first looked
the text on the side distracts the focus of the render and makes it the focus instead of the render
the sig in general is way to monotone it needs more color to it
the sig itself is too simple it just looks like duplicate layers of him behind him in different blending options
try adding c4ds and blurring the background to add some depth to it bc it looks flat
it needs alot of work so i give it a 2/5
just keep usin those tuts and ull improve so keep it up
Okay I'm going to fix it now and will post the better result when its finished. And thanx for the CnC
12-12-2010, 04:28 AM
#4
+SFX B u R n
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