can you comment on the improvement i did. thanks
I prefer the edit far more. :y:
More light and no border! (or subtle one

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The background I didn't mentioned is just loads of slapped on c4ds try not to do that and find a background that compliments well.
I would do another entire new sig (instead of updating this) taking on board more tips and just following more advanced tutorials.
Also try blend the render more. :y:
The text still isn't that good but far better than before, try keep it as close to the focal as possible, generally it works better.
Can't wait for more of the work.