Originally posted by Ace
1. Text is bad, and too big.
2. Don't like the blue thing, maybe lower the opacity.
3. Could fade the lines on the left a little.
4. Don't like the stuff on her face and hair.
5. The right side seems a little too blurred. (IMO)
~Inferno
-I need to work on my text I know

-I think it helps to make the vocal point look more attractive.
-I think you are right, they are a little too bright. But only lower the opacity down to about 80%
-That was a random C4d I placed in there. Looked OK to me. Maybe move it out of her face.
-The blurred background was part of the original image. I did not change anything.
Thanks for the CnC