(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Hey guys, just made my first video, i literally just got adobe after effects today and screwed around with it and came up with this.

Now i know it isn't anything great, pretty noobish. Just wondering is anyone had suggestions or knew of things i did wrong?

[ame=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IpU1slPNBgM]YouTube - Carnage intro(my first)[/ame]

That's a lot better then anything I could've came up with. My computer can't handle AAE lol. The 2.7 dual amd is paying off! Good job for a first intro. Only visible problem to me is the sun ray on the text doesn't look that good.

Edit: O yeah and maybe you could make the color scheme better on the letters.