(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Didnt look as good as Id like it to be.

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So then I made a second version.

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Tell me which you think is better.

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when did you start learning c4d? (im starting my self)
looks great the second one
the star/glow worm thing are way to bright and may you should have made them closer to the edge of the piece and got rid of a couple of the one over the text
i really like the moon and the those clouds in front of it
fix the lighting on the "Y"

but looks good kiu

Yeah I was looking at the lighting at the Y. It was the lighting in C4D but I was to lazy to take it off.

So I was like , Fuggg it

you could easly just brush it out in photoshop

Idk you knew C4D lol im also learning it my self but i can't get anything right lol

LOL

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Tell me what you like and dislike about it Krush !

It is really good and i think you did an excellent job, i like the whole them and the moon in the background, the only thing i dont really like is that you got the text in front of the moon but yet you have the stars in front of the text, stars should be behind the moon, so you got the depth kind of wrong in there, i know its just sig or whatever you call it but keeping it with reality makes it look better and gives it that original feeling, you know what i mean?

Mhm, pretty nice actually, maybe some global illumination on the text so the stars and the moon reflects on the text

Yeah I know what you mean. Thanks for the CnC




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I took both of your CnC in consideration but I was to lazzy to go back and fix it .

Though I messed with some of the curves and shit and got a better looking warm feel color to it then the original

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Nice man, they look awesome, I prefer the 2nd, as the clouds looked meh!

Good job :y: