Originally posted by tA.Daisho
There are a few problems worth mentioning. For example the light is completely off. Like Krunch said the whole scene is dim giving the whole signature a low quality look. You've also made the light source come from undernearth the focal which is not where it should be.
plz mention the problems i will try to fix it and make a v2

and any suggestions as well if u wanna throw some in