i know this si going to be blunt and prob hurt a little but the best way to improve is know were u went wrong. it looks like random stuff just went on, and that u didnt put much thought into it. I knwo its only your third but read up on come tutorials, and you should get it in no time =] I do like the red balls though.. all in all i give it 1 for trrying 1 for them balls and 1 for 3d so 3/10 =]