(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); I'm lordafi btw, not oc just finished this signature. I think it's one of the best i've done

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thoughts?

Yea I really tried sharpening well on this one, but just sharpening once was too blurry, then smart sharpening was the best solution

bit oversharpened but on the whole u excelled,

Downers >>>

- pen tool bit outta place, would have maybe left that out. or put it round the arms
- c4d could have been more to the right so it wasn't close to the text
kinda looks like its supporting it
- duno about the c4d over the render at the bottom, i see whats goin on with it
coming from the hands, but i think its to hard opac mate and looks bit wrong

Uppers >>>

- nice variation on the red light sources
- composition is good part from the text/c4d thing
- good selection of colours (to me you nailed "firework" colours, complementing the film)

Addons (what i'd do) >>>

- maybe a few images of fireworks as overlays or colour burns around the
top half of the background to give evn more depth
- soft layer of a building skyline around the middle FTW
possibly the one from your large art you did a while back???
- with the c4d over the hands less opac, add in a light source over each hand this may work better
plus with your pen tool round the arms it look like its winding out from the light sources there

then send me those C4D's? PLEASE!!!!!