Originally posted by FutureProphecy
Yeh that render has been used alot...
Uppers >>>
- background is sexy y0
- good composition
- don't hav a problem with the B/W render
- text is well executed and works
- those colours work, rather than your last sig rather using just 1 colour shades
Downers >>>
- showcase 1 doesn't work with a 2 same renders bud
- signature in showcase isn't blended like the left side is so looks un-even (right is solid line)
- shoulda took out his hand down the bottom right, it looks like he's doin sum fooked up yoga stuff lmao, it really looks like thats not his hand.
Addons >>>
- try re-colour the greys on afro to complement the background i.e green or blue light sources to create that needed depth on that render. it does look rather flat but then so does all anime
- add light source just above the right of afro's face as the shadows on him go the opposite way, though putting it there may not work with his "afro" shadows
- 1 px indent, 1 px white border your showcases @ the edges, it will look way better dude
- on the bar that the sig is placed on showcase, make this bar lighter grey behing the sig but ontop of the showcase background all the way to the edges, not grey, grey but slightly lighter than so you can see its a sig ontop
Summary >>>
Signature - 7/10 - overused render but built up well
Showcase - 8/10 - nice skills and looks tight
few bit's you could improve on, but i'm not one to judge that as ur clearly above me.
OMG...
lol... you give great CC..
thanks man and yeah the lighting on the render was kinda weird cause there was light on top and on the right... weird but if i were gonna make a light source, i would put it on the top right...