she has no face o.O
the effects going over the render should be taken out. the text isn't my favorite but i've seen worse. i don't like the blurred hand rite next to the actual render's hand. the lightsource is weak and has no real point to it, make it bigger and i'd personally put it just to the top left of the render
4/10 work on the placement of effects and were they go.
Well the text is only there for a watermark as this is going into my Art work for school, but ill change the things you mentioned and post it back in this topic later
EDIT.
I changed it
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I removed the blurred hand, moved and brightened the lightsource and made it bigger and also cleared up the render

But not changed the text for the reason i said above.