Hmm. Let me see if we can maneuver with this sig. Move the c4d somewhere else or take it out. The texture wouldn't be terrible if you took it off her face and chest (and boobies, I like boobies ). Matt likes it but I'm not a big fan of the font of the text. Other than that the effects on the right I likey.

Add a glow or something along that lines that doesn't pop out too much.

Yeah do what Matt said.

Do what I said and maybe either add a c4d behind her head or add a glow behind her head. It takes away from the focal and stands out too much. So Matt said add a glow that doesn't pop out as much.