Originally posted by Ace
Well, could you give me some CnC?
Also, thanks to the other guys below.
Ok well the text placement is bad, it should be closer to the vocal point and a certain % over the render. There are tuts to show you how to do so.
The flow is good, but the background is too vivid and it takes a sec to actually see what's going on in the sig.
The aren't many effects around the vocal point to really attract the eye, you should try to use a light source, and read up some tuts on blending and bluring to blend the render into the background.
Good luck.