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Tell me your thoughts, border suggestion, should i make one or not, CC and so forth

V1

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V2

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waht the p00p? i thought it was final fantasy as in the game, is that dude in one i missed? still u did the words so i'll let it off, yeh its nice man, nice colours and it all works, compostion between render and text balances nice though is it missin a "F"? good light source, helps with his head being bald and already reflecting. don't like the pen tool, bit random and i duno about the border, i'll let someone else decide its fate.

all in all, intermediate 4, skills are there, lackin those final touches though

It's a stock.

Want to elaborate on the "final touches" so I can improve it?

bit deeper contrast layer ontop, get those edges darkened down so it creates bit more depth not much even 50% opac or that, u can see the background way in the distance but it doesn't feel like its that far away so looks kinda flat to me, i'd sort the text or loose that F, it looks like a preset font on windows pc's, put a border in there but i duno what kinda style. and maybe add something to the right of the dude, u can see that white edge but no lighter c4d's or that are there to create it like that on the left, which looks much better, adding in something there may make the pentool seem more part of the composition :p

*note that all these are what i'd do and not that of someone at a higher level skill than yourself, whether or not they'll look better only time will tell if u implement them.

LOL future has said enough and I don't want to repeat everything he said...
But one question, how is this Final fantasy?
Not
your best, average 4

Use your imagination

Lordafi, you all ways seem to amaze me

V2 updated!

I like the first one more, but I do not see how this relates to the topic