Originally posted by criss
Better than the last.
I would say Intermediate 2. The sig needs flow and blending. It catches my eye but you can tell there is something different. Maybe more color on the right?
I tried to apply depth to make the front of the focal point stand out (darker). And making the parts around it darker. I am not sure what happened in the corner there, I think I just used too many C4D on linear dodge :/
Also updated thread with a newer version of the tag.