Originally posted by Sir
I really like this. The first one a bit more :y:
It has great flow and the text fits well.
It is too bright though. Try messing with the exposure and gamma correction.
It needs a tad bit more color too. Bringing out more of the yellow should compliment it nicely

---------- Post added at 03:23 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:18 PM ----------
Here I did the things I suggested so you can see how it looks:
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looks nice i have an extra layer off the brightness where i made it a bit darker but i prefer my sigs bright lol idk why xD but thanks