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Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated :y:

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It's nice, im glad it isn't oversized .

thats good man text could do with being more noticeable (what you using to make this)

I just used a render and ripple & smudge

ok cool keep up the work man that text needs something though.

Yeah I literally no nothing about fonts :mad:

lol look for something that stands out against the background so it is easy to read but dosent ruin it so dont go make it bright green :p

I can see a huge improvement

Positives :

Learning how to blend

Use if c4ds and other tecbiques

Flaws :

Text
Color scheme is OK
Depth


Anyways keep trying

Big improvement but still needs improvement.

Text, never stick text in the corner, somewhere near the focal but not on it.

Work on depth, try picking a background that fits and blur it up to give good depth.

Your BG right now is bad !

Try not to stick the focal right in the middle.

Definitely work on flow, the effects your using right now arent great. Work on that.

A theatrical border is alot better than a all around border, try straying from that.

KIU

Ah thanks
I'm not to sure how to use C4D's :confused:
When I save it then try to open a C4D in PS it says an error

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Thanks for the advice! Do you know any good tuts that can help me?