I can tell there is a city among the darkness. Bring it out a little bit by altering the lighting, but not too bright. The fact that it's darker than the rest of the tag benefits the flow, however, pitch black, does not cut it.

thanks for the feedback,
any tips on what to do with the negative space ?

this was going to be my original entry,
I don't know why I changed it :embarrassed:... but here

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Lighten it up a bit. That's seriously it.

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and btw, your SOTW entry isn't in correct format.... you forgot to add the image. :3