Meh there isn't much going on in this. There needs to be more. There's too much white. I also don't like the lines on the left. There is a bunch of splatter and sweeping lines, but then there just those random lines. They look too clean cut to go with the rest of the piece.
Needs a little improvement, but overall I like it.
It's, odd. To me, there's really no focal, and it seems all over the place, with no flow to it. The effects are cool, but I mean, this seems like one of your bad ones. :/ Sorry bro.