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No real sense of rhyme or reason. Really needs some flow or depth to it. Also, the text font takes away from the piece, rather than adds to it.

needs flow, depth, i'd rid of those two sharpened points in the middle and upper right. the random colors make it just look like finger painting tbh :/
look at some tuts you'll improve