(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); I duplicated the stock a few times to fill in the background and i was starting to smudge and decided to leave her on the left side, was going to cover it up but i didn't know what to do it, would of been plain so i left it there. Not sure if i like this one, but if some one else does i'll put your name on it and you can use it if you want.

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Your biggest problems are that the BG color doesn't match the render's, the text kills the flow and the face to the left kills flow and take away from your primary focal. If you blurred the left face, it make fit better. Nice title by the way.

Should have used some gradient maps for a nice color.. clipping mask messed the sig up imo & don't like the text position.

Keep practicing, mate :y:

I made a few different versions i made one that was blurred don't think i like it anymore then the first one. And i wasn't going to put text on it but thought it looked like it needed something else.

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Your sig :y:

If anything, the text should be slanted toward the top right to go with the flow. Same with the face on the left. There should be more and more green as it goes up, also slanting to the top-right.

As John said, the text should go the same way the pattern goes (down left, up right). Also, the background doesn't really match with the render (maybe apply a little Hue and Saturation and turn it purple?) and the woman on the right shall have its opacity lower. But hey, Nice one :y: