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It is placed perfect.
As this is how I drew it out before I started it.

Even though the text isn't a focal point, it should be depicted clearly in the signature.
Your signature is quality work; you have great potential. The only downside to it is the text placement.
A great signature has good quality in all aspects (text, flow, depth, blend).

His face looks like over sharpened or something. But that's the only thing I don't like. I think the text looks good.

thanks , it's nice to see a name like yours cnc my work !

and can you go into detail on what exactly is wrong with the text ?

You know how to blend the text, so that's good. However, look at its visibility. You can't quite make out what the text is saying at when you first glimpse at it. Text should should always be visible on the spot.

I like it a lot mate..

I thought it was Poseidon at first.