alot better then your other one
im guessing those are C4Ds u put in there
strange choice of render haha
the text is better lemem try to find a tutorial and i want you to follow it and post back your finish project
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try that one and see what you can do
try to find your ''signature'' or your ''style''
alot of signatures dont need a C4D they just make certain types of them better for your eyes to look at
advance in what you do and keep on tutorials and they will take u far