Post: Lost
06-21-2011, 01:30 PM #1
videobot34
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i think its need more but not really sure what

also kinda follow tut for the cool stuff on his body

not really happy with the background
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06-21-2011, 04:45 PM #2
LegenD
Proxze
I like it but I dont think it's a good size to off used. But that's my opinion... Smile
06-23-2011, 05:14 AM #3
OH MAN, THAT LOOKS SICKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK. i want that for a desktop BG
06-25-2011, 07:21 PM #4
LuckoftheMoose
Moosalicious
I like a lot about the work you are presenting, and it has even more potential if you fix just a few things. First, I think your render looks amazing, did you add those effects and designs over it? If possible, to see the original render would be awesome! Also, I like how there is a bit going on but it is not overwhelming. The color scheme you have going on is nice as well. If you made the red from his shades pop-out more really nice job, gives it a nice look, I would recommend doing something similar with the flash from the gun. Like a bit more darker of an orangish-yellow imo, but is not needed, just whatever you like. Now for the lighting that goes from his right arm out, i would erase a bit of it as it looks like it is going to our left a bit too much, just try not to have it go so far out alone, or add a bit more to our left (which I recommend more), it will add a bit more to the picture, just don't overwhelm the picture with too much). The text is the one thing that I don't like too much about this picture, definitely have more fun with it, add some nice effects, do more custom text look if you know how to, if not download some really amazing fonts and work off something like that. I think the text is too dark, too hidden, and does not balance the focal point out. Lighten it up a bit, maybe a bit bigger and a few clicks to our left (a bit more if you add more to his right). Also, a small border, or a very unique border would be nice, make sure to keep it dark, black preferably. If you fix up the text and add a border it will greatly improve the picture, if you do all the fix ups above I think if done right this picture will be perfect. As of now though, it is a still looks nice, so good job! Let me know if you do improve it at all too!

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06-25-2011, 11:46 PM #5
Death_pact
Little One
please make a 1080p version. i want it as my wallpaper Happy
06-26-2011, 12:46 AM #6
videobot34
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Originally posted by LuckoftheMoose View Post
I like a lot about the work you are presenting, and it has even more potential if you fix just a few things. First, I think your render looks amazing, did you add those effects and designs over it? If possible, to see the original render would be awesome! Also, I like how there is a bit going on but it is not overwhelming. The color scheme you have going on is nice as well. If you made the red from his shades pop-out more really nice job, gives it a nice look, I would recommend doing something similar with the flash from the gun. Like a bit more darker of an orangish-yellow imo, but is not needed, just whatever you like. Now for the lighting that goes from his right arm out, i would erase a bit of it as it looks like it is going to our left a bit too much, just try not to have it go so far out alone, or add a bit more to our left (which I recommend more), it will add a bit more to the picture, just don't overwhelm the picture with too much). The text is the one thing that I don't like too much about this picture, definitely have more fun with it, add some nice effects, do more custom text look if you know how to, if not download some really amazing fonts and work off something like that. I think the text is too dark, too hidden, and does not balance the focal point out. Lighten it up a bit, maybe a bit bigger and a few clicks to our left (a bit more if you add more to his right). Also, a small border, or a very unique border would be nice, make sure to keep it dark, black preferably. If you fix up the text and add a border it will greatly improve the picture, if you do all the fix ups above I think if done right this picture will be perfect. As of now though, it is a still looks nice, so good job! Let me know if you do improve it at all too!


thanks man

and heres the render
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06-26-2011, 02:37 AM #7
LuckoftheMoose
Moosalicious
Originally posted by videobot34 View Post
thanks man

and heres the render
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No problem!

Wow the original stock is very boring compared to what you added, great job!
06-26-2011, 09:02 PM #8
TheBigRod
uh-may-zuh-zing
Originally posted by videobot34 View Post
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i think its need more but not really sure what

also kinda follow tut for the cool stuff on his body

not really happy with the background


You should put a border around it, would make look a little more professional. Smile

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