aside from the dumbest comment ever above.
this needs work, you're trying to force a signature, instead of letting time and your imagination flow into your work.
to many things distract me , what is your focal?
color scheme is gone..
and the text is a NO NO!
Everything else is good, : /
practice
+pA RUFFIN.
i just tried the little border thing coz everyone seem to do it

. i kind of get you, i was on a rush when i was making it. And the C4D i was just experimenting with it, making like an explosion thing