Post: 2nd sig ever made
07-08-2011, 01:37 AM #1
MrSwag
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07-08-2011, 01:49 AM #2
Genocide-
★GoML★
4/10

Render doesnt go with BG

Render seems to small

Text is like impossible to see. First look at this piece I didnt even see it.

To much space.

Lacks depth.

Fractal doesnt blend.

No real focal due to the lights and then the render slapped in the middle.
07-08-2011, 02:25 AM #3
MrSwag
Keeper
Originally posted by Genocide
4/10

Render doesnt go with BG

Render seems to small

Text is like impossible to see. First look at this piece I didnt even see it.

To much space.

Lacks depth.

Fractal doesnt blend.

No real focal due to the lights and then the render slapped in the middle.


i wanted to try to keep full character body in it and i really dont know what fractal is
07-08-2011, 02:50 AM #4
Originally posted by Genocide
4/10

Render doesnt go with BG

Render seems to small

Text is like impossible to see. First look at this piece I didnt even see it.

To much space.

Lacks depth.

Fractal doesnt blend.

No real focal due to the lights and then the render slapped in the middle.


Genocide I Want Your Input On My Sig.
Tell me about it on this thread please.
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07-08-2011, 04:20 PM #5
Raumycr
Do a barrel roll!
i'm not gonna reck you with CnC cause there's a lot
i'm just gonna say something about compo you should do from now on with all your tags
don't ever center render/focal and don't ever put your render/focal ALL the way to one side
it's called the rule of thirds. imagine a stretched out tic tac toe board across your canvas, you wanna put your render somewhere near or right on where the lines intersect on the tic toe board. it'll make the focal pop and appeal and naturally draw your eye to the focal. if you don't understand here's a drawn out pic. you want the focal pretty damn close, if not right on the green dots:
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07-08-2011, 08:15 PM #6
MrSwag
Keeper
Originally posted by Raumycr View Post
i'm not gonna reck you with CnC cause there's a lot
i'm just gonna say something about compo you should do from now on with all your tags
don't ever center render/focal and don't ever put your render/focal ALL the way to one side
it's called the rule of thirds. imagine a stretched out tic tac toe board across your canvas, you wanna put your render somewhere near or right on where the lines intersect on the tic toe board. it'll make the focal pop and appeal and naturally draw your eye to the focal. if you don't understand here's a drawn out pic. you want the focal pretty damn close, if not right on the green dots:
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Ty for the info imma move try to remake it and change my render spot and try to add more depth
07-10-2011, 03:43 AM #7
ngu3
Keeper
i liked the green signature on the first one it matched her hair good job

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