Originally posted by Depression
I hate [most] rap (Kid Cudi being the main exception) so NOT talking crap about the focal...
The Topaz on the focal looks really out of place, especially with the admittedly HORRIBLE pentool lines and the gritty texture on the right side. If you got rid of the text and the pentoolin, you might have had something going for you here.
But seriously that text... it needs to go.
hahaha i know exactly what you mean but text had to be there it was for a competition