This is one of you're best, good use of applying a grunge effect to the background which helps the render blend because the render would be in the grunge section, the reflection however is too strong, it over powers the image too much you should lower the opacity of that to about 20% (maybe lower if it still looks too bright) also the scanlines are quite dark you should lower the opacity on them too.
Originally posted by MartinMck
i cant really comment on it as im takin part in it aswell but good luck
You could at least give him a rating of it lol, he's still beginner level's he's not been in gfx that long.