Looks good, only thing i'd say is that, the build up to clips is a little slow, in a montage i wan't to see fast clip to clip, not the person walking for a few seconds and then aiming is scope. If you get what i mean.. but overall good job
Thought you did a great job on it. It's a tad dark though. And live recorded clips are always so much better than the theater ones, if you can help it.