idk bout this one man... seems all over the place to me. like why the hell is the text practically upside-down? also the effects seem random and dont fit with the chill style that I believe you were going for. keep tryin though man, thats the solution to everything :black:
It's all a bit blurry, kinda like if you were to look at a 3D image without the glasses on. Not sure if you were going for that effect but I don't think it works.