(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); I believe this is slightly less fail.. I'm also quite the fan of the lack of a typo in my title.


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not a huge fail :p i see potential but it needs some work here and there

-a bit monotone
-weird color selection although i kinda dig it
-that yellow twirl is distracting

all these are opinion of course

The text could be a bit more visible, and yh the swirls are a bit distracting. :/ I liked this one though

the gradiant maps that i wanted to do (Purple > Yellow) and (Blue > Yellow) ****ed up and changed the purple / blue to a noisy green so can't blame mono tone 100% on me :L

and as for the yellow twirls, thats part of a fractal i used, although i agree the one in the bottom left is a bit distracting.

@ Omshiv: honestly i considered not even putting text because it's so hard to make flow. but i wanted my name on this one so i just shrunk it and put it out of the way.

don't worry we all **** up some time :hug:

Not me tho

its ok but u should add a bigger text like hidding up from the girl :y: and make the focal bigger.

7/10 :y: