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lacks a background making it boring. I like the effect good flow



i dislike the line near her head looks out of place

the solid black background is hard to work with :/ Wish I could have found a render of this woman. Yeah I think I should have added a little more c4d to the top of her head.

I don't mean to be a dick or anything, but its all about taking your time and trying to adapt the render. My version with exact same stock: You must login or register to view this content.


Now back to your version:
Depth is kinda not there, the c4d's were a bad idea

Hmm you're version is definitely busier, but looks a little too messy and the effects around her look over sharpened? Also lighting needs a slight adjustment. Very good though. For me I think the C4D's fit the piece, it's a different style for me but I kinda like it, nobody else seems to though :/

my piece was done like 6 months ago dude I was trying out different styles at the time. But a little tip since the background is black, you can create a new black layer and merge it together with the render making the stock bigger and easier to work with

very boring
maybe a background or texture could help

L2GOBORDERLESS

Thanks for the tip, However I don't want to be working with this kind of stock, I'll stick to my style and try to improve it further.