(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); I decided to give it a shot and enter this week, just wanted to see how it looks, well here it is

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CnC and rate would be nice

I don't like how I can't tell what part is the render or what's the c4ds, also the text doesn't fit well on the arm. It's alright but could have been improved . 2.5/5

o ya i shouldnt have blended the c4d color with the render my bad but i was trying to give it that explosion look kinda thing, do u kinda get wat i was trying to do though?

Yea I see what you were tryingto do, but I guess it didn't come out the way you wanted. You'll get get better at it as you make more like it.

Looks like one of your best so far.
Not keen torwards the monotone though.
Overall, 3/5

k thxs very much, its cool hearing that from someone in the +ta family

now im all happy and wat not lol

Ok...... The lines a pretty random use a different type of lens flare, I think having more color in it and not just all overlayed with red would look better, The text on the arm don't look to great to me, The lens flare with the ripples looks ok on the right but the left side looks fugly to me. It was an ok try 2/5, as rick said it is one of you're best but it still needs some minor improvements. Make a V2 so i can see how you get on :p

ya i had a different color look to it and i saved it yay but then i threw it away cuz i realized that i cant change the sotw entry but the other one had like a yellowy look to it