I dunno if it would look good but I would use a soft brush and go between white and black.
I would paint a think line behind your last c4d used and the BG then try some smudging.
I think it's the lack of depth doing it for me.
Your render and the effects used are great but then there's just a blurred BG.
Know what I mean?

You need to stop being a dick dude.
You should ask him to make you a sig so you can have something decent.



I like it bro.
Just doesn't seem complete to me.
The BG is throwing the sig off for me.
But all in all it's nice.
Glad to see you getting back at it bro.

looks great .