No true focal point. The outsides seem to catch my attention more, ( might just be me ) especially the fine hairs of the eyebrow on the left. A simple blur will take care of that. Also as for the borders on top and bottom , they usually only look good when the picture is wider. Loose the circle flares, and the text. Other than that it is a very well composed peice of art. Actually one of your best I've seen in a while. Keep up the work man!
-chaoz.