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Was being bored so i decided to be creative with my name, now i have 2 versions (well versions, more like different color scheme)

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oh and gimme some things to improve on too

Why is no one replying d:

I like the second one best. Nice design, I like it because it's different and interesting :busta:

Look LQ, that's because you saved it as a .jpg. For now on save it as a .png.
Looks ok, the first one is better. All you did for the second one is the default purple and orange gradient map.
reflection could use some work.

LQ? I strictly used pent tool vectors because of the HQ outcome compared to the laso tool where the edges get blurry.
where did you get the JPEG part from? they're both saved as PNG, not sure where you are looking at.
As for the coloring on the second obne, that's true, but i asked your opinion on which color is better, so i could imrpove on that one, the last thing you said, the reflection could use some work, mind giving me some tips for it? saying "it could use some work" doesn't really help me out at all, infact, it leaves me with a dead end of progression.

I like the design of it an think it is clever how you wrote it using only one shape. The colours go well on both but i prefer the second one, although i might prefer it more if it was a little bit darker and just adjusting the contrast a bit to make the orange seem more of a sepia colour (personal opinion).

As with the reflections, i do think they need a little bit of work but not a lot. The main thing is that it seems simple the same picture just flipped and faded a bit. What you need to do is imagine that the reflective surface is a floor and try to create some form or perspective. The easiest way to do this is to take the part of the reflection which is closer to you and stretch it down a bit, and widen it a bit. Apart from that i like the design and would like to see a finished piece when you have made your adjustments!

Edit: I looked at it again and i think the part that was putting me off with the colours is that the pale colour in the second one seems to be a bit 'blocky' inside the lettering. Slightly affects the quality of the picture and makes it seem as though you have saved it in a format which cannot handle the 6 million or however many colours a high quality image needs. This is an easy to fix problem but i think it will just add to the final image quite a bit

Hope i have helped a bit!

Sorry about that I must have misread it.

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See the hard sudden end of the texture to the reflection? Try to use a soft brush and erase the bottom of it to make it a gradual change. Use a soft eraser brush on the bottom of the reflection,then place it directly under the text/pentooling.

I like you guys ^_^ been getting some nice critique lately!
thanks alot

The blue one for sure!

first one looks best, don't like the color of the second one at all. Make the second color scheme red/orange/yellow=fire? would contrast nicely as the first one reminds me of water.