Post: Critique my latest work
02-05-2012, 10:19 PM #1
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02-05-2012, 10:20 PM #2
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wow, nice work!!!
02-05-2012, 10:21 PM #3
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wow, nice work!!!


aww thnks <3
02-06-2012, 10:16 PM #4
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Personally I dont like this one. BUT it is still decent. Good job.
02-07-2012, 01:15 AM #5
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Originally posted by Moo
Personally I dont like this one. BUT it is still decent. Good job.


Yea I don't blame you, you really have to be a fan of "Cowboy Bebop" to understand it.
02-07-2012, 01:24 AM #6
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If I can be honest here bro it doesn't look like much was done.
I mean I see the text (which needs work) and I see a brush behind the gun with an outer glow.
This sig is just really lacking depth and flow.
Keep at it though bro =D

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02-07-2012, 01:29 AM #7
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Originally posted by cK
If I can be honest here bro it doesn't look like much was done.
I mean I see the text (which needs work) and I see a brush behind the gun with an outer glow.
This sig is just really lacking depth and flow.
Keep at it though bro =D


This it my 3rd sig ever made so obv not going to be the best but I will keep at it Smile

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02-07-2012, 01:57 AM #8
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Originally posted by smd View Post
This it my 3rd sig ever made so obv not going to be the best but I will keep at it Smile


No I understand that it won't be your best.
And it is good for a 3rd.
Would you maybe make a v2?
Maybe keep all the text together (move the "that weight" under the other text) and lower the opacity.
Maybe do a light blur on the BG but not too much.
Sharpen your focal a bit.
That would be a good start bro.
Just trying to help.
02-07-2012, 03:00 AM #9
smd
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Originally posted by cK
No I understand that it won't be your best.
And it is good for a 3rd.
Would you maybe make a v2?
Maybe keep all the text together (move the "that weight" under the other text) and lower the opacity.
Maybe do a light blur on the BG but not too much.
Sharpen your focal a bit.
That would be a good start bro.
Just trying to help.


I might revisit it once I get better. Mind explaining wht "Sharpen your focal" means and how to do it? Still learning the jargon of photoshop.
02-07-2012, 05:06 AM #10
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Originally posted by smd View Post
I might revisit it once I get better. Mind explaining wht "Sharpen your focal" means and how to do it? Still learning the jargon of photoshop.


Well when you do any piece you have one particular spot that stands out beyond all the rest.
This is refered to as your focal.
So for instance the dude with the gun would be your focal.
You want him to stand out the most on your tag.
And sharpen is just a tool.
If you right click on whatever is there you will see smudge, sharpen and blur.
Hope this helps a bit.

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