Post: Legion
02-15-2012, 05:24 AM #1
Surikizu
GUMI fanboy
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02-15-2012, 06:17 AM #2
videobot34
(╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻
so very messy
really dont like the text
way to monotone
wtf is up with those random clipping mask?
02-15-2012, 06:26 AM #3
Surikizu
GUMI fanboy
The right one, I don't know. Lefties, I forgot to blend them in I guess.
02-15-2012, 10:05 AM #4
FSGPwner
Bounty hunter
I like it to be honest, keep up the good work!
02-15-2012, 04:50 PM #5
Sempiternal
Previously uG~ Wounded
I don't like the right clipping mask, it stands out way too much and doesn't contribute to flow.
Depth isn't there but it could improve.
Hmm it is quite mess although it looks weird, kinda unfinished.
Keep it goin'.
02-15-2012, 11:23 PM #6
Surikizu
GUMI fanboy
Thanks for the comments guys! Each comments provides me the items I need to improve on. Happy
02-15-2012, 11:35 PM #7
Rage
NGU Original
I really like it, I like the crazy abstract clipping mask shapes. It's just in general aesthetically pleasing, the colours flow perfectly and the lighting is good.

Personally I think the colour version is far better as it adds a nice bit of character. Smile
02-17-2012, 09:28 PM #8
tylerallmighty
Human After All
Originally posted by cK
Looks like I'm back in action, I liked the way this turned out Happy

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The clipping mask (not the text) destroyed the flow. Completely remove it. I think that's about it for the bad side. Everything else is great. :y:
Flow
Font/Text
Smudge?
Coloring
Lighting
All good. Smile
02-18-2012, 02:04 AM #9
Surikizu
GUMI fanboy
No random clippings
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02-18-2012, 07:17 PM #10
Grumpy
Grumpy is God.
Originally posted by cK
No random clippings
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Love this one! :love:

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