left side is plain and just empty and the ngu txt is just distracting since it is far away from the focal point,
the soft brushes need to b set on screen if thts wat u were goin for bc thy look akward and the brushes set on overlay (im guessin) r messin with the colors on the render, if u wanna get the render to b a blue color dont just put brushes over it on random points try using gradient maps or photo filters,
the white lines u should also get rid of they dont look good,instead u should replace it with a c4d to blend in the render more,
so yea thts my advice lol i kno ur just starting so id give this a 3/5 cuz my first couple sigs were worse thn this lmao
Thanks for the feedback! I will take it in to consideration.
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