well im not loving the text u shouldnt try not to use fancy txts the simpler ones work alot better

but u could put a clippin mask over that txt see if it comes out better
im not to fond with the boxes but i guess it looks alright but lower its opacity a bit
u should have smudged him a bit cuz he stands out to much from the bg
the render kinda almost looks LQ try sharpening it
add more c4ds unless u wanted it to be plain then i guess its good for ur comebak
i give it a 3/5 since ur trying to get ur stuff together