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Opinions?

You really need to work on depth and flow. It also looks like the render has a low opacity?
Kinda difficult in explaining this. When creating a background, try to not just add something that looks cool. Create a background that will compliment the flow of the signature and the movement off it.

This is a tutorial i made hopefully It will help:

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How about this for better flow?

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If you'd like I could teach you via teamviewer? I'd teach you the basics and what to look out for in every aspect to tagging.

Sounds reasonable, Let me reDL TeamViewer and we'll be in business.

I like it with text better personally.