(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Here something I just put together and testing other stuff out. This is my third sig and Im still trying to learn the ropes so let me know what you think! Thanks

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I like it a lot! I think the focal could use a hint of color, and maybe sharpen it a little so it's more noticeable. Other than that it's pretty sweet. 4/5

Well first thing, never mess with the render that much since its your focal and now its not as attracting as it should've been. It's kinda dull, the render can use some sharpening and color. 3/5

Thanks for nice hints and comments!

i like it especially for ur 3rd did you follow a tut or just make it from scratch i like it good job 4/5

Made it from scratch and thanks

3.5/5

You should make the focal have color, but the rest is good

well its nice for your third sig just that its dull either add color or more FX and like otg said try not to mess with the render,other than that i give it a 3/5 for a beginner keep it up and you'll become better i see potential in you

the first thing i noticed was the biggest and most often made rookie mistake i've seen on this site, Blurring/Covering the focal. DON'T DO IT! it completely throws the signature off balance. and it lacks flow with all those lines just streaming in all directions.

i don't like to give number ratings because thats all people look for and they don't read the advice.

good sig prawn and the focal needs a bit of sharpenin and some colour so it stands out more but good attempt for a third sig