(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Alright here is my new half life two sig hope you like it hope to get some cnc on this .

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THat black line on the right is HORRIBLE. And this just looks like a rip off of burn's style. Sorry 2/5

It seems very plain to me, also the render looks stretched. Not your best I'd say its a 1/5.

You dont "rip off" someones style because no one really owns a style, he's trying to learn from wat other people do. However, i agree the black line looks pretty bad but also its far too simple, it looks like a stock/render with some splatter brushes on it. Also id erase any splatter which goes over his face. Get some C4D's in there etc and have an actual background. good luck
Your improving..

KILL the black bar/line thing cos it looks terrible. also the bg is far too plain so sort that out. but the 'Burn' like brush effects look good

Harry your pwning at sigs now
if i was you i would add something in the background
anything thats fits well maybe a texture or something that goes good
i would take the black bar off too on the right
you should also add some more? c4ds on the splater that stand out but not to much
and i think that should be it.

Well I do agree he's improving. But he should have some variation. Because it does look like Burn's style. And by that I mean the style he likes to use. I understand he is learning.. but at least have some variation from the original if you are going to use the same idea.

Splatters and clipping masks.Thats all you did.