Pen tools annoying...
Anyways :p Onto cnc, you've overused the splatter brushes, majorly ^^ id have used it maybe twice and then clipping masked them both. Then id add some C4D's in there. The pen tooling in this is fine for me although it could be alittle more visible/brighter. Text isnt great but considering u havent done one for ages its not too bad. Id just get rid of some splatters and get some C4D's in there
@punisher, please dont just say whats wrong with it, Its supposed to be constructive critisicm, offer advice on how to improve it.