C4d's draw waay to much attention. Idk whats wrong with it, but the bg just looks a little weird to me, and the text is small, hard to read and a bad font.
Try using smaller c4ds and belnding it more so it doesn't draw attention. Try smudging the bg a little bit. And use a different font, and try not to unnecessarily tilt the text. And last, just add a border. Its really easy, just make a new layer> Click Ctrl+A> Go to edit> And depending on what program you use, look for stroke or stroke selection. Click that and set it to whatever color you want (black is usually best) and set it to 2 or 3 pixels.