What up with his right shoulder? try fixing that.And remove the doubled render on the right side over there.And the lighting is too intense,reduce it a bit.
The text isn't a good font and is kinda hard to read. His right arm is just.... gone. I think you should take out the second Spiderman (zomgwtfbbq!? Spiderman isn't in the dictionary!?) that's there on the right. As Zak said, I think red would work better than pink for this. And last, I think the light in top left is a little too bright. You do have good effects and it is better than your SOTW. 3/5
take away the duplicated render and use a different font clipping mask it that would be nice reduce the brightness of the light and try making it more red cos that's the colour of spidey not pink