Originally posted by .Taco
I do like the first one, but as said, it's lacking in a few areas.
The second one is defintely a step in the right direction, to (once again) back up what Vectriix has said. :p
some good fonts to download are Impact and Trajan. you could also experiment combining non-seriff fonts with script fonts to get a dramatic elegant effect.
Good work :yes:
I made some design combining the two. I'll try those font thank for this i'm going to continue to experiment this a bit until I come up with the final design

I very appreciate those feedback that's how we learn!