yeah match your colors. and to me the focal is to coverd with c4d's / brushes. under the gun there is a spot where you can see the eraser marks. one more thing, whats the blue thingy under the guns bipod.
3/10. sorry but it's just not awsome..... it looks good but once you take a close look you see the problems.
4/10 not ur best work ww3, first off the background is completely random nothing blends in and the color of your text + the font doesnt fit in whatsoever the red throws off everything else and the lighting wasnt placed in the right area
yeah it's a nice start but i think you should work on that color red and replace it with dark grey or black and also a bit more light wouldn't be that bad serieusly