You're definitely getting better but there are some things you might want to change. Text, is again too curly and bulky it isn't readable really. You might want to add some gradients and/or light sources as well.
thanks, and im rubbish with text and blending it and all that, and whats a light source sorry, and i did a b/w gradient on background
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You're definitely getting better but there are some things you might want to change. Text, is again too curly and bulky it isn't readable really. You might want to add some gradients and/or light sources as well.
what you think about V2 (message to short)