its better but try make text clearer, i can only read it because i no what it sais,also i no u tried to use blue because of the render but try using other colours other than blue, also try to blend render in by smudging a bit, and for making easyer blended renders... duplicate render say 8 times and fill all white areas, then smudge it then do a guassion blur, betwen 10-20 shud b fine.and when blending text dont smudge, try changing layer format to value or what works best, and try changing opacity...sorry 4 long message, hope i helped, good luck in future, ul get better before u know it, ive only been makin sigs for 3 weeks and id say ive improved, also watch tutorials on youtube, that helped me